Simple Verse.17.On A Swing Comments

In my comment on the poem TRIALS i referred to the need to balance effort with levity, so that the demands of life are answered but also the joys are fulfilled. This poems speaks directly to those joys. It is so light, deligtful, infectious. Who in their balanced mind would reject such joys in the name of higher good? These joys ARE the higher good, and all we need to do is pace ourselves so that we can pursue them.

On the swing is really a treatise on our lost and found childhood.......................Great way of losing ourselves to those blissful days.........thanx

I very much enjoyed the rich panorama that you so effortlessly presented in this poem and was carried away on the swing!

This is such a cheerful and delightful poem...with beautiful flow, rhyme and rhythm...lovely!

So sweet is the passing air How it tickles our curly hair Activities of children are ever sweet for all. Very nice talking poem that speaks about sweet nature of children in advance. Wonderful presentation makes this special.

Thanks for sharing bit of summer in winter, this rhyming poem flows like stream, I can visualize the scene as I go through this poem. Thanks for sharing this nice poem :)

This poem of the poetess is a very interesting one and in other poems of the learned poetess having such a word power, imaginations, and a world of curiosity is there which the reader have to find their own conclusions. May be the divinely feeling about the children or the auspicious occasions and celebrations peculiar in this moth of December in worldwide whatever the imaginations may be I here see a most beautiful poem that is interested to the readers and I likes it.

I imagine a sweet mere chit of a girl, like Lucy of Wordsworth, hidden in a poetess, inspiring her to expose the hidden beauty of the past childhood and I also see the unconditional surrender of the poetess before that sweet lovely girls, the beautiful poem is evident................10

excellently composed....the actual prevails here..........i am really impressed by this poem.........thanks

Beautifully written Valsa. I could picture myself on the swing. Near my home there is a swing right by the beach and when it is empty I fill the seat. Never to old. Thankx

So sweet is the passing air How it tickles our curly hair We shall watch the verdure spread And the flowers in pretty colours clad- -very nicely composed. Many thanks madam.

So sweet is the passing air How it tickles our curly hair We shall watch the verdure spread And the flowers in pretty colours clad- -very nicely composed. many thanks madam.

Very beautiful and visual. So sweet is the passing air, How it tickles our curly hair. Such a sweet poem.

Nice sweet poem dedicated for sweet children and penned so beautifully with nice and soothing words makes the piece profound......Valsa.......amazing write.......10/10

All the stars that shine in the sky Once were children who went up high It would make me truly glad If into a shining star, I be made......................nice work...resembles the children in summer vacation...

Let us go up on a swing And widely spread our wing And swing up sky high... Beautiful song full of enthusiasm. I loved every line.