Simple Verse.16.On A Sunny Day Comments

We often enjoy the beauties of nature like bright sunny day, different color of flowers on the trees, hum of honey bees, dancing of leaves with wind in amorous glee and the hill with rising thrill etc. A heart touching expression has been made. Brilliant poem amazingly shared.10

You have opened the book of nature for everyone to see. The rhyming of the poem was perfect which makes it all the more interesting. 100/10

A beautiful, beautiful poem, loved its rhythm its flow... in fact everything in and about this poem. This poem is so very simple so very soothing, madam Valsa.

Oh! I love this poem...so jocund and full of life! Lovely!

Only in the lap of Nature wonders of happiness can be best explored and again with simple and innocent brush you have made Nature more vibrant before us......simple yet powerful verse.....Valsa......10/10

How simple is to find true happiness, your poem clearly shown the path. Thank you dear Valsa for another beauty share!

When I read such poems I too am transported into a world of sweet joys that a countryside alone can bestow us with. Unlike William Wordsworth who always felt possessive of beautiful nature you have introduced to us a nature that is everybody`s and your invitation illustrates the case of pride for all poets whom you would not like to leave on any arid land... Beauty, thy name is this Valsian poem! Here is my 10 marks for you [ the 3rd click] Valsa madam.

Then we shall roam in the valley below Where the trees are planted in row Some among them are laden with plum We shall pluck and eat them yum, yum, yum! A delightful write.

Beautiful song to sing along. After a rain or even a storm, a bright day comes along and makes us forget the agony of dullness. Lo, after the dull and rainy day Has dawned a bright and sunny day Down the valley we go where trees are planted row after row. So beautifully described. I enjoyed the poem and sang along. Thank you.

Can I bring my iPad along in case I get bored? Will we have WiFi on the walk? Ha! You really are a country woman at heart aren't you Valsa? There is a simplicity of spirit in you that comes across as being so gentle and wise in spite of your poet's heart. It is hard to imagine ever really needing anything modern in your company.

We shall watch the beauty on our way Listen to the songs of merry Jay Enjoy the flowers on the tree Dancing in breeze with amorous glee dance of nature

cordial invitation to a sunny day......enjoyed this nature song......................

Thanks for this beautiful and poetic invitation but I am too old now to sing and dance and play. However I would welcome your video on the Face Book and enjoy the beauty of your enjoyments. Are you sharing a video?

Also the sparrows which chirp on the trees.....the species are not seen regularly as before. Sparrows were in my child-hood days, now only in dream we get its chirps.