Thursday, October 9, 2014

Simple Verse.15. A Pussy Cat Speaks Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a cute little pussy cat
I love to lie on my mama's cot
I always chase the ugly rat
That comes to gnaw at my master's hat
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Valsa George
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Rajesh.c Bose 30 October 2014

your poems purge us from our sins....

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 27 October 2014

An amusing but relevant poem with such interest on a domestic cat and poet narrates the story of the cat by itself through the poem in a beautiful style and it is very much beautiful to read and amuse and relax.

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Salini Nair 23 October 2014

awesome write....i like each line...............

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Ramesh Rai 10 October 2014

A beautiful rhyme. Nicely penned. Enjoyed the reading of this poem. 10 out of 10

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 October 2014

i love cats, and you Valsa, make it larger for me with this verse.

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Paul Sebastian 10 October 2014

A beautifully crafted poem! A poem that should go into children's book. Reading your poem, anyone would love a cat! Great write. Enjoyed it.

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Somanathan Iyer 10 October 2014

The cat in the poem looks more beautiful than in its real form. beautifully crafted words add more beauty to the poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 October 2014

Beautiful song for all. Children can sing it out loud and enjoy poetry and its beauty. Hope it will inspire more children get interested in poetry. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Soulful Heart 09 October 2014

a purring meaow for this beautiful poem valsa ......as always beauty in common things around is the mark of a real poet...

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Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2014

If it is really a poem on a cat it is really beautiful. If it is a symbolic poem it's a symbol of Valsas complete control and amazing abilities to write a poem. In any case a poem that will be remembered long.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 09 October 2014

So sweetly crafted with simple and loving words and with beautiful rhyme.....Valsa......really a phenomenal piece crafted brilliantly.........10/10

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Tajudeen Shah 09 October 2014

a very common observation is glorified, sure it might enthrall if read to the young ones. while looking at the lines itself, every line progressed with the the same experience of looking at a cute lil kitty... ahhaha. see, tell you the truth, it really is hard for me, to write such sharp observation in very simple, apt words, that too maintaining a due rhyme. thanks for sharing such a welcoming piece this morning. God bless.

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