Thursday, February 15, 2007

Simple Silence Comments

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Are you thinking of me, from your
Golden braids, your windblown tresses?
The jazzing is cerulean, phosphorous,
It steals my heart towards yours.
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Landrey 16 February 2007

very special, Jonzo. I like the breakup, I always have a life-death struggle with ph as I'm trying to format my poems and so far it always beats me. I like how you use words very differently sometimes. for example, in this poem: towards, joys, song. Those are normal words but you turn them into something to merit a double take. ah, jazz. -landrey

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Jonzo Bandwagoner

Jonzo Bandwagoner

Huntington, NY
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