Simple Race Comments

Barbara Cadogan22 hours ago Great message! Comment 0 AMEN

Excellent Piece yvonne sensing21 hours ago Life is to be moved on as a simple race...beautifully said...great power...excellent poem Comment 0 Well composed

AMEN Joye Atkinson24 minutes ago beautifully expressed Comment +1 VERY GOOD Edward Wilkes26 minutes ago We are just lumps of clay, hopefully allowing ourselves to ever be refined along the way. Comment +1 Excellent! ! !

Edward Wilkes26 minutes ago We are just lumps of clay, hopefully allowing ourselves to ever be refined along the way. Comment +1 Excellent! ! !

Antoinette Townsend31 minutes ago Great poem! ! True words! ! ! Comment +1 Intense and riveting, despite a few grammatical 'glitches.'

M P 22 minutes ago I just love the energy of this poem, enough to overlook the obvious grammatical and metrical 'license.' :) But please work on these things - getting them right is a means of adding strength and credibility to your work. Well done, Hasmuk

a good ovation to the almighty, penned in pouring language. now the need of the hour it increase vegetation stop pollution to save ourselves and our progeny. rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai Jul 10,2012

LaSoaphia QuXazs Yes, it is good to stay whatever you are. But be sorry what we did has no value, that is the teaching of religions. When God created the world, He called it good, beside he gave us a free will to try out our own short comings. What happens to us, we caused it, but for the reason to learn from it. So, everything is necessary for our own progression. And that can bring happiness, or tragic for us. We have the choice.

In morning and in evening I pray Earnestly fall to his feet to show the way