Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Simple Pleasures Comments

Rating: 4.8

Watching all of the sweet smiles on a loved ones face
Running around the race track and keeping up the pace
Touching the dew drops glistening on the wet ground
Going out to dinner then stepping out on the town
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Patricia Grantham
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Deiann S 06 September 2019

Excellent, Thanks for sharing

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

Giving a helping hand to some who show they are in need Sitting there with the lonely showing someone a kind deed ........../// beautiful poetic expression

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Ramesh Rai 30 June 2016

Congratulations. Awesome write. Simple pleasure is more joyful than the pleasure of moment.10++++

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Bernard Snyder 28 June 2016

This poem I can relate to so easily. Congrats on it being chis an as 'POEM of the day! Awesome Patricia!

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Kim Barney 28 June 2016

So delightful, this poem. I especially love the last line: Enjoy the simple pleasures in life for soon it'll come to an end. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!

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Lyn Paul 28 June 2016

Simply beautiful. Thought provoking and the want to read again. Thank You

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Ovi Odiete 28 June 2016

This is just so beautiful.......... Congrats

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The little thing that we sometimes take for granted are what really make the difference in life. A well worded work my friend!

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Bursting with beauty is this creative and compelling composition. Well done my friend! Congrats on this poem being chosen as poem of the day. Well deserved!

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Amitava Sur 28 June 2016

Hi - Dear Patricia - congratulation for writing such a beautiful poem which justifies the honor, given to this poem. KUDOS to you.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 June 2016

A great poem out of the most simple things, which if enjoyed can fill ones life with immense joy. Heartiest congrats for composing such a beautiful poem as also on it's rightfully being selected as Poem of the Day.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 28 June 2016

Such a lovely poem! Congrats on being poet of the day, Patricia!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 June 2016

Freshly made by the bees! And, to respect nature. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 28 June 2016

a wonderful sermon....the little things are actually the most beautiful things in life. I enjoyed the the flow. congratulations

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Loke Kok Yee 28 June 2016

beautiful and meaningful! ! congrats and thanks

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Simple pleasures are the best pleasures of life. Sitting, watching, remembering, tasting and savouring the little, yet lovely things of nature gives immense pleasure. Thank you for reminding that these are some of my favourite things too!

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Kelly Kurt 28 June 2016

I make it a point to be present and appreciate to the fullest, moments of simple pleasure, and I tell others to do it as well. Nicely written, Patricia. Congrats

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Daniel Brick 10 June 2015

Your prose comment clarifies the meaning of all the images of simple pleasures in the poem. How many days would it take to do each one just once - probably three weeks or more. That just adds emphasis to your list of simple pleasures because they can more than fill up your time with joy. But your closing last half line IT'LL ALL END SOON reminded me of a line by Andrew Marvell that haunts me: FOR AT MY BACK I ALWAYS HEAR TIME'S WINGED CHARIOT HURRYING NEAR.

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Frank Russell 26 September 2014

This really strikes a chord in our stressed-out techno-society. Thanks so much for the sweet reminder.

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Ken E Hall 06 July 2014

Simple pleasures in life are life its self the most pleasurable and your poetic list is perfect in love and peace... are we so lucky to give...regards

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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