Friday, August 4, 2006

Simple Mistake- Not Grammacially Correct Comments

Rating: 5.0

Physical pain is actually felt
As I try my hardest not to cry
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Amber Green
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Christopher Lacomba 23 January 2007

who cares about the spelling if you get the emotion behind it, very good poem.

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Abigail Keller 11 August 2006

Grammar Shmammar, this poem is perfect without it! Oh gosh I know what you mean! ~Amber~

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Gabriella Franco 04 August 2006

i will not let myself spill You hit it... great line. That word 'spill' describes so very well how i feel sometimes... I'm working on a poem called 'Spilling' at the moment. At least I THINK that's what it'll be called. wonderful write, darling. Keep it up.

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