Wednesday, December 3, 2014

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My love, it's only when I'm close to you:
I can take off this freezing mask of mine,
And let you look into my soul divine;
Aflame would lit if only others knew.
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Danny The Dreamer Boyd
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Pamela Sinicrope 19 October 2015

I like your poem! The use of dark and light and introspection shared with a love interest is great fodder for a poem. Its romantic and sweet...but not too sweet...cause you're a complicated man. Well done.

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