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love this poem

Her wholeness I know to be a fiction of my making, Still I cannot dismiss the longing for her; It is a craving for sensation new flesh. The sense of wanting. tony

Simple lyrics for her for the love for the sparkling of love for the dazzling sophisticated love now become distinguished loving lyrics Simple lyrics for her for her beauty for her paragon of gracefulness now become extraordinary poem

He's sharing feelings I hope we all could relate to, but instead of singing " I got it bad and that ain't good, " he provides a pleasant read.

The space her leaving has created I have attempted to fill And found only forgeries... //.... Outstanding poem of love and longing with sweetness of a beautiful song. Thanks.

Someone help me im dieing slowly and painfully

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bad it didn't show the true things in life such as sorry depression happiness and anger ,

I can always use these poems as guides for my teachings of Literature

🤯👍👍👍👍it’s good I love it.

This are very good poems they have away of relating with our everyday life

This are very good poems they have away of relating with our everyday life

I love this. Simple and interesting

What a lovely poem... Nice! ! ! Thanks for sharing....

''Her wholeness I know to be a fiction of my making, ''.- it's about the spiritual part of this woman that should exist inside him. This part is a fiction. ''She is away and I cannot breathe her in.'' Moreover, he really needs to create the ideal woman inside him. For this purpose, he needs the opposite.''Among them I expected her opposite, / And found only forgeries.'' But maybe this woman can make him feel complete.''It is perhaps for more than her.'' He uses the word 'perhaps'.- wonderful poem- voted 10

A crafty poem on love and passion, i liked it. At night above the parks the stars are swarming. The streets are thick with nostalgia; I move through senseless routine and insensitive chatter As if her going did not matter.

Love and its fever is intense here. Very passionate expressions. Thanks for sharing.

Her jubilance that filled me, It’s a wonder I’m not gone mad. I am ill simply through wanting her.... / Lovely expression of feelings of a lover towards his lady love. Beautifully crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.

A pure love poem out from a true heart- 10

Her wholeness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.