Thursday, February 4, 2016

Simple Little Lives Comments

Rating: 5.0

Settling into the evening quietly, just people watching,
entertaining myself with their actions, observing every
detail at length.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 06 February 2016

People watching - everyday drama - appreciating SIMPLE LITTLE things. The fact that you can do this watching shows your heart is clear and open, and it puts the reader's heart in the same mode.I sensed your watching was also a kind of protection for the children, your vigilance keeps them safe. As a poet you have the patience to let things happen around you and then turn the scene into poetry so it's preserved.

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Valsa George 04 February 2016

It is always a pleasure observing little children and watching their pranks and innocent mirth! A slice of everyday life, beautifully presented!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 February 2016

Turning in to expression to feel life being young in innocence is definitely interesting. Wisely penned poem shared on.10

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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