Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, August 24, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

I felt as if she is near by and around
Still not seen and could not be found
Touches me gently when I go round
Sweet presence felt when feet placed firmly on ground
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Rinki Nandy 23 January 2010

Women are generally kind and very tolerant They remain very pleasant with quality inherent It is their powerful weapon and very essential To prove its worth with element so substantial your words describe us the best. so good to know that in this chauvinist world there exists a man who not only admits but appreciates a woman's beauty, lovely and eternal.10++++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 January 2010

i find the last verse the best but of course the whole is good! nice write!

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Venkat Ramanna 15 October 2009

I feel she is near by and around Still not seen and could not be found Touches me gently when go round

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Sergio Bruno 26 September 2009

Everywhere she can be felt at little ease Memory strikes continuously and not even cease

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Sagarika Shah 06 September 2009

Nothing detracts me when I think Eyes stare for moment and not wink...10

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Edwina K 29 August 2009

Reminds of her sweet presence As love to me is matter of essence..............10

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Sadia Hussain 28 August 2009

Slowly slowly slip and start to sink Come back to sense and freshly rethink.......10

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Ramdulari Sinha 28 August 2009

She has made great impact on mind Thousands of attempt but can’t find.......10

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Sita Kesri 28 August 2009

Nothing detracts me when I think Eyes stare for moment and not wink.............10

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Sangita Rao 28 August 2009

She may live as long as I am present Not necessary to have her consent..........10

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Mubeen Sadhika 27 August 2009

Extraordinary poem. Nicely written. Deserves 10+

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K.v. Subbarao 27 August 2009

Touches me gently when go round Sweet presence felt when feet placed on ground......10

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Darshna Chopra 27 August 2009

Icy winds pierce through in wool Nice feelings and mind very cool....10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 August 2009

you know sir, this one's good. I miss my crush. Her name is natalie abayon.

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Severina Dsouza 26 August 2009

Slowly slowly slip and start to sink Come back to sense and freshly rethink....10

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Lalvani Rekha 26 August 2009

She may live as long as I am present Not necessary to have her consent.....10

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Indani Narayan 26 August 2009

She has made great impact on mind Thousands of attempt but can’t find

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Inner soul cautions me it is not fair--> a great expression deep and rich... for your simple grace I gave 10

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Jigisha Vyas 26 August 2009

Slowly slowly slip and start to sink Come back to sense and freshly rethink...10

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Suwarna Patil 25 August 2009

Is she in small particles or in air? In fire, light, ray or flair /////10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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