Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, November 17, 2013

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Nice souls do exist but speak little
I expect more and fail to settle
i wait for it but expect more
Tell me now where to go and score?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Interesting, but I find it a little unclear. Aaron Carlin36 minutes ago I did enjoy that poem, but what it is a about I am not entirely sure. However, I like the way it sounds though, and I have at least something of an idea on what it's about. nice souls exist, but speak little. Agreed! Comment +1 seems good.

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Chelsie Crossfield38 minutes ago I don't have much time, and therefore can't go into dept but it's ok. Comment +1 OK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Della Meeks38 minutes ago Good. Needs a little work. I am a grammar nut and have a hard time reading things that can't or don't make grammatical sense to me.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2013

Nice souls do exist but speak little I expect more and fail to settle

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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