Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, April 22, 2012

Simple But Strict Comments

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With little milk and bread
Pet will follow till you are dead
A fine show of loyalty
With just or little of royalty
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2012

Re: Simple but strict (Score: 1) by Zbird on Monday, April 23,2012 (08: 16: 00) oh Jadia what a powerful and humbling poem! I love the way you start with how pets are so loyal even when given so little and then move onto how ungrateful we humans can be. a very honest poem. well said, my friend!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 April 2012

Nightowl an interesting write. Unconditional love is rare these days. Pets react to whomever feeds them and shows kindness. Not sure it's love. Children' can be nurtured with love. And God must have such an abundance to love He's still as patient with us as He is today, despite all our failures. A thoughtful write. Enjoyed it. tfs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2012

With little milk and bread Pet will follow till you are dead A fine show of loyalty With just or little of royalty

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