Simple, Basic Comments

Indeed, simple things are the most inspiring that make man feel bliss!

Oh, so wonderful! Happy to give a well deserved 10 to this beautiful poem. You seem to be basking in love and happiness, may this continue to shower on you for ever! 'Simple things basic needs nothing else For as long as you’re mine sadness melts I’m ok I am fine I’m at peace ‘Cause the life that I have is a bliss.' You take the readers with you in enjoying the bliss of life. Now, about your note, the first part is of course undeniable. With regard to the second sentence, may I say, those who are not 'secured and showered with love', may also ' see little things others forget'. Please read my poem 'You And Me' and be kind to offer a few words.

Keep it simple couldn't agree with you more. A lovely write. I wish to reiterate, that you have got it just right now. Always a pleasure reading poetry written thus. A 10/10 again :)

Keep it simple couldn't agree with you more. A lovely write. I wish to reiterate, that you have got it just right now. Always a pleasure reading poetry written thus. A 10/10 again :)