Thursday, September 6, 2018

Simile Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart skips for you like the gazelle,
Swift limbs over the pale earth,
Seducing the dust till death,
Away from wrathful foe swift fled.
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Joshua Adeyemi
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M Asim Nehal 06 September 2018

Superb Love..... My heart skips for you like the gazelle, Swift limbs over the pale earth, Seducing the dust till death, Away from wrathful foe swift fled.

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Joshua Adeyemi 06 September 2018

Thanks for this good comment. Joshua.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2018

This is nice to see you again after long time. Swift limbs over the pale earth does gazelle with skipping of heart. Death turns the body into dust but soul keeps love to shine ever. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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Joshua Adeyemi 06 September 2018

Thanks so much for your nice comment... I've been away because I was spitting into the eyes of life that he may position me well...Thanks once again. Joshua

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