Wednesday, June 3, 2020

Silvery Splattering Comments

Rating: 5.0

While in my boat upon the blue sea,
It rained nonstop for endless days,
And I missed the birdsong in my tree,
And the sunshine's warm, golden ways.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 June 2020

Wonderful flight of imagery accompanied by minute observation and the style of narration has made this superb poem unique. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Thank you for your wonderfully encouraging remarks.

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