Sunday, February 14, 2016

Silver Waves Comments

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Flowing water brook you see
Sparkling silver water waves are sparkling you see
In sparkling silver waves you see the jumping fish
Jumps my heart to drink the water
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KAVIN CHARALAN
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Kanniappan Kanniappan 27 February 2016

You bring the scene of flowing brook nicely before our eyes. Thank you.

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Souren Mondal 14 February 2016

A very well written poem Kavin.. The imagery is beautiful.. Thanks for sharing..

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