Monday, October 24, 2011

Silver Tongued Kiss Comments

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My silver tongued harlot,
Lie your lieing tongue upon mine,
let our tongues dance be revered,
and envied by all,
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Crimson Love
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Lenore Lee 24 October 2011

I've gotta say Kristen pretty much said all I was thinking. To the point with a fantastic story.

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

An excellent poem, , I like the twist on this poem or I feel so.. Anyway it's such an amazing write! ! ! Top marks! ! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 24 October 2011

Crimson, you have proven many times that you have a really good skill...and the theme always good like always...I like all lines you shared above...Definitely you choose only the best things for this write...What a nice short poem you did, keep it up :) _Unwritten Soul

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Lady Keys *rainbow Gang* 24 October 2011

i lyke it (good job) sassy, sexy, and superior

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