Saturday, September 16, 2017

Silver Thread Comments

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Dark ominous cloud
Looms above, veiling the sky
Only a sliver
Of sunshine breaks through their wall
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2018

Cloud is veiling the sky and you have perceived the lining beautifully. Sunshine breaks this and silver thread appears. This is a very powerful Tanka poem...10

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