Silver Thread Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

Silver Thread

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Dark ominous cloud
Looms above, veiling the sky
Only a sliver
Of sunshine breaks through their wall
Silver thread among the black

Saturday, September 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2018

Cloud is veiling the sky and you have perceived the lining beautifully. Sunshine breaks this and silver thread appears. This is a very powerful Tanka poem...10

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