Thursday, October 6, 2016

Silver Of Hope Comments

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Receiving a medal for his mettle,
Running barefoot in the hot sand, constant in the summer race
Besotted by the color and shine of the prize,
Ignoring perceived stumbling blocks
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Dr. Antony Theodore 02 March 2021

util he finishes with a silver of hope. very fine poem with a noble idea and a vision. tony

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Dr. Antony Theodore 02 March 2021

The closer he gets to the end the more inner freedom he feels It has taken so long to reach this point,

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Chinedu Dike 08 November 2019

A beautiful inspirational piece of poetry written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 10 October 2016

Good event you pick to tell it all...it is a delighted view from you as the success itself is a medal and deeper meaning than just a hanging medal..i think in life also the same we all struggles for something and it just time and our strength to keep going this life race..someday we will win... :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 October 2016

The summer race! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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