You stand there in the darkness,
people screaming everywhere,
although you want to,
you can't help them,
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This is a very nicely written poem anne, the switch of the narrative from darkness to light between the two stanzas, make for a interesting read, keep it up,10.
you wake up and feel happy, you look around and see only light, light and happy people, a light mood hangs above, you look aside and see your savior, you see your angel, you see your silver lining. a good and inspiring poem with good logic and sweet expression and you in your small age did a good task to write good poems and this one is perfectly done..and thanks for your sweet words for me too.. pray for your more success and happy smiles.. really doing a good job..10/10