Saturday, October 17, 2020

Silver Fish Leap High In Silver Moonlight Glow Comments

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silver tears of pain in rivers flow
breaks sorrow dam taunt heart strings
releases life current vibrant love
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Terence George Craddock
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 October 2020

A well crafted poem. " After flood torrent comes calm quiet water." So true. Great imagery. Thank you for the dedication. Glad that this poem was inspired by my short poem, Tears.

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Paul Brookes 17 October 2020

white light and silver tears the poem expresses sorrow and lament the words flow with the tear Great write

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