Thursday, September 1, 2011

Silver Bells In The House Of Hell (Precious Heavy Metals, Pt.2) Comments

Rating: 4.5

I'm looking around,
But it's like everybody is broken.
Suffocation—no breathing!
We all seem to be choking.
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Axley Jade Blaze
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John Raubenheimer 27 November 2011

Yes, all the broken people Never asking to be here Filled with nothing but - the most intense despair. Four lines in which your struggle with the human condition shows its worth. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

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