Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Silver Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are clouds that hang
silver-grey in the air,
before the winter sun
gives its first rays
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Gert Strydom
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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

all the stanzas operate to invoke the theme, tone.. nice write..lovely to read.10++

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Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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