Wednesday, September 27, 2006

Silly Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was feelin' kind of silly
From me head down to me toes
As I couldn't tell the difference
'Tween me elbow and me nose
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Dee Daffodil
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So....Does that mean I have to stay naked? Or wear bed clothes? Think I need a lie down.......... Ez

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Chuck Audette 17 October 2006

Superb writing, bringing a well-needed smile to every person who reads this. Thank you, Dee! 10! -chuck

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Francesca Johnson 05 October 2006

Sounds like something me old friend Kate would tell. I really enjoyed the fun of this one, Dee, me duck. Love, Fran xxx

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Brian Dorn 05 October 2006

Great poem, Dee... silly, but clever as well. One of the all-time cute poems in my book! ! Brian

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 04 October 2006

What a joyous wonderful write! A 10!

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Alison Cassidy 30 September 2006

Dee, the title hooked me. I love the word silly and your poem measures up delightfully to the promise of the title. I agree with Scarlett, very 'Cat in the Hat', and well written to boot. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Ernestine Northover 27 September 2006

So hilarious, So brilliant. So very well constructed indeed. I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Well, well done. I'm still laughing. Cheers. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 September 2006

Quite an amusing piece, DEE...Wit and Cleverity abound, as well as solid structure, and smooth flowing rhythm.....Fine job''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Scarlett Treat 27 September 2006

Dear Daffy Dee Daffodil: This daffy poem was such fun to read that I immediately sent it to meself, and all me grandchildren to read! It has a very Dr. Seuss feel to it, and it was great! Write more like this one! ! Scarlett

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Duncan Wyllie 27 September 2006

Love it, just great fun Dee, well done the world needs more lifts like these Love duncan X

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