Silly Season Comments
1. Spring
Fragrance!
The darkest spell
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Incredible imagery, beautifully written! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...............................+++++
Hi Becca, Thank you for throwing deep insight into the poem and the appreciation of my efforts
A beautiful poem written in a unique style. Interesting to read the various characteristics of seasons. Loved about autumn. 'Drizzling All through the day. Warns the lingering breeze, " Gear up, the worst is yet coming" The fall.'... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.10++++
Thank you Anilji. Your detailed observations show that you have gone through the poem thoroughly. I am deeply obliged for the appreciation.
Hi Liza, I am dumbfounded. I understand that you are a Russian. Then, I am at a loss to understand how you could write in Hindi, And thank you for readymy poem and honouring me with your comments. Obliged.
I do not have any idea about this form of poetry.But your poem is extremely beautiful. Let me quote a stanza- 1. Spring Fragrance! The darkest spell Of the cold witch is over. Nature plays Holi; gulal spreads. Spring springs.
Normally, almost all forms of poetry in the English literature insists on a rhyme scheme, apart from the meter. In order to conform to the rhyme scheme, one should have extraordinary command on vocabulary. Should be a real wordsmith. Which, I am not. Cinquain is one form, which does not have the rhyme scheme. Just like the Japanese forms like haiku etc, it has just a scheme of number of syllables. It is 2-4-6-8-2. So, I found it very simple. Contd
Part 2 Thank you for the time and the valuable observations on the poems.
Though it is your first attempt at this form of poetry from a collection of four Cinquains, yet it is so brilliant and fantastic. The events and festivals as per season are well executed. Holi; gulal in Spring, dried and withered flowers in Summer, lingering breeze in Autumn and Cold winds in Winter are touchingly portrayed. A fabulous work.10
Thank you, Kumarmani Sir, fit your wonderful comments. Your words are so valuable to me.
A wonderful poem that emphasizes the four Seasons and expresses in brilliant detail their respective attributes. A compelling imagery that lingers in the mind of a reader. Beautifully crafted write.
A refined poetic imagination, Unnikrishnan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Thank you sir, for your time visiting my page and expressing your appreciation. Obliged.
Sir, I have read your poem and posted my observations on your page. Thank you for the invite
It might be your first attempt at this form of writing but i must congratulate you on writing this brilliant piece. Your poetic prowess is quite evident and i would like to read more poems of this nature from you. A poem that captures the spirit of seasons artistically. Kudos!
Thank you Nosheen, for reading my new poem immediately on posting it on ph. And the wonderful encouraging comments. Obliged, Nosheen.
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8/1/2025 9:27:50 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful movement around the year. I also love the intense and characteristic wording for each season.