Silly girl with your head in the clouds,
When will your feet touch the ground?
You're childish and living in fantasyland,
You may not be mentally sound;
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What a charming self portrait - written with unselfconscious flair and the perfect proportion of silliness and honesty. It's good to share words with a fellow sixty-something who has the mind and heart of a child and the timeless wisdom of many lifetimes. As usual your writing is impeccable and your subject worth its weight in rainbows. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
this again is very good.. your characters are so alive. that is what I always like about your poems. kinda filled with life.. this is good, very nice to read.. helps my mind a lot than shooting people in games lolss.. yeah all this have a therapeutic effect more than anything.... some parts are kinda fun to read too.. nice.. many tens for you.. with lots of love shan
Midnight, truth be told, is i'd leave a detailed comment on this Ori Pen-Gem..but i'm not sure i qualify...I went into my fantasyland at birth...and well...i thought that was it.You mean im supposed to come out of it? Oh, yeah... This gal you just beat the bejesus out of on the world wide web...Is she blonde? hah! FjR
How utterly divine. When is 'silly' silly? As you know I'm a silly girl, and boy, do I relate. Wonderful work L - one to make any girl, silly or otherwise, think (more than) twice. t x