Friday, September 30, 2011

Silly, Foolish Boy Comments

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Silly, foolish boy
With ideas so amusing
You think you own my heart
You believe you have my soul
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Madison Riffle
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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Love is the purest emotion of heart no one can fix a price over it, when it comes, no one can stops its flow....but being a challenge when one doesn't accept it... Nice poem... A challenge for that person with silly, foolish ideas... I like this poem...

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Madison Riffle 30 September 2011

Thank you for the comments. Yes, it would be just as foolish for me to demand love from someone who cannot give it, but the point is more that he thinks he has me, but the only way for him to get me is to love me. There is no in-between if he wants all of me. I based this on a friend of mine who seems to think he can capture my heart while still holding me at arm's length and this poem is simply a statement that it won't work.

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Stefanie Fontker 30 September 2011

A silly, foolish boy he seems, indeed. Lovely poetry, I love your passion.

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