Friday, January 16, 2015

Silly Fights Comments

Rating: 5.0

whenever they had a fight on
words of disgrace were passed on
On their every single talk
she Barks at him at all
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Fatima Obaid
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Abhinit Chute (abz) 18 February 2015

Good rhyme-scheme. Though it flowed well, it was kind of too plain. Add figures of speech for better impact. Good read and Good luck.

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Mohammad Skati 08 February 2015

Thanks, great poet Fatima, for this great and lovely poem. It's really that kind of poems that needs someone to read it many times. I loved it. I will keep read it whenever I have time. Good luck.

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