Silken Thread Comments

Wonderful work and a joy to read. Spiders webs are a work of art in their beauty and construction.

Luring ist prey! ! Nice work.

here is how it is about to go into the showcase, with my Bri's Note. bri :) - - - - - - - - - - 25. by Annette Aitken Silken Thread Each silken thread woven with grace shining, enticing luring its prey A welcome sign in crystal illumination hynotising with precision unsuspecting passersby the silken thread will catch their eye This silken thread all paved with gold one wrong step your future's told. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bri's note: With Annette's permission, I made some 'corrections' to her spelling etc. She admits spelling is not her strong area. I DID find that in U.K. there is a different spelling for hynotising, so I've left that, although I 'mistakenly' nudged Annette into changing it from hypnotising to the American/Canadian spelling, hynotizing, on her poem's page. Damn language differences! ! ! :) ================ bri ;)

oops! i somehow managed to send my comment before it was finished (see below) . - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - here is the rest of it. .................a showcase for PH poets for July 2016. one wrong step .................one day i did something like that; i stepped right where a dog had been squatting! - - - - - - - - - - - - your's is a deadly story indeed! bri :) thanks.

i think some of what i call misspellings are just the British spellings. we Americans, OF COURSE, have different (BETTER!) spellings for some words. i really like the poem. nasty spider! ha ha this shall adorn my/OUR

I love this one, I love it! ! ! One wrong step..your futures told! ! ! A ten most well deserved. You just inspired me to write a poem along a similar line of thought, wonderful! ! !

Yeah the silken thread looks is beautiful and it catches the fly too like a web. Nice work. Keep inking.

Really nice work, very is beauty in everything if you look hard enough.