Friday, August 12, 2016

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Rating: 5.0

In rage, red hot fireball
On the skyline ablaze
Emits its rays, charring up
every thing caught, to charcoal
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Christopher Tye 24 August 2016

Delightful poem makes me think of hot summer days scorched by the sun and cool nights under moonlight skies.

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Thank you Chris for your comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2016

Lest i get burned up! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks Edward for reading mine.

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Valsa George 16 August 2016

A very passionate write......! Fire getting doused by another sort of 'fire'! Great imagination!

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I am so thrilled to have my poems reviewed and commented by you, Valsa. Thank you for taking your valuable time to do that.

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Thanks for your professional view and the comment.

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Nilima Deb 14 August 2016

A delight to review your creations.well penned your thoughts are quite moving.

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Thank you Nilima for your encouraging kind words.

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Kelly Kurt 12 August 2016

Your poetic vision is wonderful. Jayatissa!

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Thank you Kelly for your encouraging words.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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