In rage, red hot fireball
On the skyline ablaze
Emits its rays, charring up
every thing caught, to charcoal
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Lest i get burned up! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A very passionate write......! Fire getting doused by another sort of 'fire'! Great imagination!
I am so thrilled to have my poems reviewed and commented by you, Valsa. Thank you for taking your valuable time to do that.
A delight to review your creations.well penned your thoughts are quite moving.
Delightful poem makes me think of hot summer days scorched by the sun and cool nights under moonlight skies.
Thank you Chris for your comment.