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This was a joy to read Bravo!

Part 2. After marriage, the house "she" was born into, "she" spent her childhood is no longer hers. And "she"bids farewell to it forever. All this is said in the poem, without being said. Loved it.5 *s

Hi Ruta, In the Indian context this poem has many levels of sensitivities. We are very sensitive about the house we live in, spend our childhood… And when the Protagonist is a "she", this house could connote a "maaika" and the occasion could be her marriage..

awesome.silhouetted against cobalt blue sky is great expression Dear poet Ruta.Top scores.

Excellent poem. Well penned.5 stars

Good innocent poets are there in your own state. They are your well wishers. Don't doubt their integrity and character. I am sorry for my utter stupidity.

Love this! Well done.