She sat near the white roses
Petals fallen on her hair
Tied in golden locks
Agitated by the air
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i agree with Wilson Walkden-Brown the story speaks clearly and it sees so real it's sad
I love the idea of the poem, the plot or story so to speak. Poems are often wishy washy (like mine HAHA) you got straight to the point with this one and i loved it.10
A great poem indeed but it makes someone feel bitter inside his /her heart because of its emotional attachment. You can also read mine entitled ' ln Memory Of My Mother '
again full of insight and emotion and surprises-liked it Anthony
wow, great poem for someone is 14, and stronge.but i luv it so much
A strong and heartfelt poem from one so young. Lovely! Keep writing and sharing with us. Best Wishes, Marilyn
very touching write, sania...lines are really tears- wet... good piece 10
This poem touched my heart. She's so lonely that she doesn't even have a loved one to hear her cry, just like how most of us feel at times. well written, Sania :)
very moving...i liked it! Thanks for ur comments about my peom. TC
Well done with beautiful images and attention to details. One can easily imagine the scene. Sets up an appropriate mood.