Saturday, January 12, 2008

Silently She Cries Comments

Rating: 4.7

She sat near the white roses
Petals fallen on her hair
Tied in golden locks
Agitated by the air
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sania harris
COMMENTS
Ben Gieske 26 November 2008

Well done with beautiful images and attention to details. One can easily imagine the scene. Sets up an appropriate mood.

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Keith Williams 14 October 2008

beautifully written sania great work

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Sapher Yra 11 October 2008

this is another great poem. i really like you work

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Hana K 09 October 2008

i agree with Wilson Walkden-Brown the story speaks clearly and it sees so real it's sad

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Some Poems 08 October 2008

I love the idea of the poem, the plot or story so to speak. Poems are often wishy washy (like mine HAHA) you got straight to the point with this one and i loved it.10

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Talia Torres 07 October 2008

exceptionally donee I am inspired by your work; keep it up

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George Dumbarton 07 October 2008

A great poem indeed but it makes someone feel bitter inside his /her heart because of its emotional attachment. You can also read mine entitled ' ln Memory Of My Mother '

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Enoch John 06 October 2008

Quite an emotional upheaval, I imagine.This poem sounds real.

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Anthony Dover 06 October 2008

again full of insight and emotion and surprises-liked it Anthony

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Roger Naya 30 September 2008

amazing poem, you are begining to impress me

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sara }i{ 28 September 2008

wow, great poem for someone is 14, and stronge.but i luv it so much

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Marilyn Lott 28 September 2008

A strong and heartfelt poem from one so young. Lovely! Keep writing and sharing with us. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Brianne Lindline 28 September 2008

You have some true talent. I love this one a lot.

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Asif Andalib 28 September 2008

Touchy but I want you to write God-gifted poems. So 6

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Kesav Easwaran 28 September 2008

very touching write, sania...lines are really tears- wet... good piece 10

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Emily Oldham 28 September 2008

Touching... keep writing, thanks

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 September 2008

touchy touchy touching..................gooooood

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Sylvi Sylva 12 January 2008

very moving piece - conveyed with tact and i say topten!

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Afshaan Suleiman 12 January 2008

This poem touched my heart. She's so lonely that she doesn't even have a loved one to hear her cry, just like how most of us feel at times. well written, Sania :)

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Seema Aarella 12 January 2008

very moving...i liked it! Thanks for ur comments about my peom. TC

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