Saturday, March 31, 2012

Silently Beautiful Comments

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Silently beautiful
With every word said
With smile in her face
With stars in her eyes
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A good poem. Expresses how you really cherish your life. Keep it up

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Adeshola Adams 20 April 2012

It's good to aim to be good.U'RE GOOD AND STIL HOLD TO IT!

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Melody Thaila Kuku 04 April 2012

This is a nice love poem. But you may need to check out some word usage in stanza 2 and 3 which you need to replace with other words that will enhance the picture you are trying to create. Still, great write up.

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