Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Silently Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silently I told the Lord
Of the heavy heart I've borne,
Then you appeared, offering your love,
My prayer of thanks I've outworn
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Lora Colon
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Darlene Walsh 04 December 2014

A beautiful poem about love. I like the way you change from 'Silently I' to 'Silently we' in the last stanza. I don't understand the last two lines, they sound sad and I was expecting something very happy? Darla :)

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 16 November 2014

Silently we share our love, Our vows in silence spoken, How long the wait, yearning until Our silence can be broken An excellent poem of communication in silence.More vistas and horizons open when we communicate silently.Truth also dawns in silence.Very well done.keep it up 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 04 November 2014

great write Lora, true love is never pompous.

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