Thursday, September 3, 2020

Silentium Comments

Rating: 4.6

A morning comes outside a window;
silent and pale
nobody's home, just a broken shadow
standing and laughing beside me.
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Iwan Jaconiah
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J. G. Burton 28 December 2020

Excellent writing

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Nicola Ann Jeremiah 24 October 2020

Vividly visual. Nostalgic. Good work. Keep it up.

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Bhavika 17 October 2020

Wonderfully written

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Suresh Kumar Ek 29 September 2020

The poem reminds us Of hope poetically

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