Silent Watcher Comments

Excellent portrayal of the theme. Your mind seems mature than your age.

Interesting. it makes you wonder as to who you are talking about. only thing i suggest is rhyming sequence should maybe be slightly altered other then that very powerful and moving! good work!

Great Lines Loved the Last Lines the Most Silence is the Hardest Act to learn.... Being Silent Does not mean that we dont know about what is around us But it means..That what is Around us Does Not worth the Words

this is a space catching poem....beautifully written........

Angels are all ways watching until you ask for their help.'I send my angels to guide and protect you lest you stumble against a stone' paraphrased from one of the psalms.Good poem.

Interesting poem. I like poems that are open-ended leaving up toi the reader to determine the context. Good job.

nice imagery Aden I like how it got picture in my mind to see what you coming from...thanks

God will not grant you any sort of deliverance! Waiting for god is you not having the courage! (well, you wanted my opinion anyways)

I liked it, the silent watching phase gives me a good picture.

very good I liked it a lot. we are all silent watchers in the game we call life. *PurkeyGirl*

Silently watching i can silently assume ...................................... Remarkable, mysterious poems////10/// Kindeat regards, Tsira

This is a great Job Aden. Thanks for sharing. very smoothly written. I enjoyed reading it.

Aden, do you have anyidea what a real poet is? A real poet is someone who can take an idea, like Silent Watcher, and make it flow evenly in free verse. Just because you aren't published, and just because you aren't the poet laureate, does not mean you are not a poet. When we walk down the street, or sit on our balcony porches, we are silently watching life go by, while we just relax. This is a very well written free verse poem, and has a message for the reader, if only the reader is wise enough to grasp it. I am a silent watcher too of all that flashes before me in this looming endless battle we call life. And what conclusions do I come to from my silent watching? That is what my poems and stroies are all about. Thank you for sharing, and I am giving you a 10 for this. And yes Aden, you are a 'real' poet. Hugs, Barbara

Soft and vivid words flow nicely in a free form verses....though there is a typographical error in it i think it shld be FAITH i guess. ----- Either way love of country or love of man, awareness is most likely to perceived. a 10.

ADEN, YOU HAVE TALENT AT WORK/IN THE WORKS. KEEP IT UP. AS TO STANDING BY WATCHING, WHAT IS THE WORD MOST OFTEN OFFERED AS A REMEDY? ACT, I BELIEVE. DON'T LET FEAR OR INSECURITY KEEP YOU FROM ATTAINING YOUR DESIRES/YOUR GOALS. NICE INTROSPECTIVE POEM. OH, AND, YES, THE OBJECT, THE SUBJECT OF YOUR SCRUTINY MAY BE HOPING THAT YOU'LL STEP FORWARD AND BREAK THE SILENCE...THANKS FOR SHARING, CAROL

voters are like that. nope we are thinking the same. i'm writing poems in my mindthough i'm silently watching. thanks.md