Silent Watcher Comments

it seems Silence is the greatest watcher nice 10++++

O silence is hither silence is thither silence is everywhere wanderer to the path of gravity of motion with or without all great expectations ...nice 10++++

Another excellent write.+++10

Nice poem. I think allot of poets feel like you. Its difficult to be a critical observer and not think many of these things. I like the line, I sat behind a rainy window and feared that I'm just passing through. You convey in the next two lines your observation of pain and agony both in- and outside the window. Which one do you choose? They both sound appealing? ;) So you wait for an opportunity to take part when the scene changes to serene? Nicely written poem.

I LIKED THIS POEM.THANKS.

silently and just wait. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.