The night was on the horizon.
My friend and I were walking silent
on a complex field
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A pleasant display of fine poetic skills in fine and lofty verse, well conceived and elegantly crafted with insight. An art of a sober mind. Thanks for sharing.
There are two notes I find that GOD created everything in paired. Time denotes also two conditions of every circumstances great writing 10+++
wow fine arts of word- There a cyclic clock giving Time on timeless... great 10+++++
It's a fabulous poem! Wonderful photography! Loved reading this little piece of sparkling poetry! I vote it with a 10
In one hand there is glare of light where as in other hand there is darkest of houses of specters. Here we can view the social justice or injustice silently. A brilliant poem shared startlingly.10
Dear poet, thank you very much for making such an inspiring comment. Your supportive words strengthen the message concealed in the poem.
I am always impressed when anyone uses a second language. To do so, and well, with poetry; earns my admiration. Keep writing. Peace
timelessness.. darkness, light, city.. so many thoughts..... thank u dear poet. tony
Tony, you’ve done a great work. You know protest is the language of our consciousness. Your poem expresses that not only impressively but effectively too! Tony, you’ve done a great work. You know protest is the language of our consciousness. Your poem expresses that not only impressively but effectively too! Tony, you’ve done a brilliant work. You know protest is the language of our consciousness. Your poem expresses that not only impressively but effectively too!
Tony, you’ve done a great work. You know protest is the language of our consciousness. Your poem expresses that not only impressively but effectively too!
Well, silent viewers, come out talking now for these verse leaves a reader with a lot to ponder about...like it
Thanks for your time and precise comment. Chandan