Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Silent Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Struggling to keep the voice calm
Watching the water flowing
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Elena Sandu
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Simone Inez Harriman 12 November 2015

Elena your poem really touched me. I was so glad you had explained what the magic pen was for. I re-read your poem with new understanding and tears. Disturbing, haunting and brilliantly penned. Thank you Elena.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 November 2013

Ineresting piece of writing,

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Khairul Ahsan 03 November 2013

My heartfelt condolences to the bereaved families of the dead and the missing. 'Of course I cried, who wouldn't? '...Well understood. 'they all kept quiet, trying only to push the children and the wheeled chair people Higher.' These lines are soul piercing!

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Danny Draper 29 October 2013

A compassionate and well structured piece on content and lyric. The tragedy of the tsunami in the bay of Bengal was incredible in its cope and breadth of los and devastation. I recommend to you also a similar poem of mine Ancient Plates.

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