Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Silent Tears Comments

Rating: 4.2

I sit in the corner crying all alone
Wishing you would come back soon
My life is nothing without you
I wanna tell you how much I love you
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COMMENTS
Kyle Youngblood 21 July 2011

Sad, but great poem...my pet dog ruined the effect cuz he started snoring when I finished reading..lol 10/10!

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 14 June 2010

A very nice poem, my favorite line 'My life is nothing without you/I wanna tell you how much I love you/But i dont think you love me/Because you love someone else as i see' but careful you can waste a lot of time loving someone who doesn't love you, but you never waste time when you truly love yourself

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Whispering Rose 01 May 2010

beautiful poem, strong emotions, very similar to one of my poems 'best friend' keep up the good work

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 28 February 2010

I heard the sound of sadness here! release your pain, shed the tears, Silent tears water your life grain... Good Luck. ThanksForSharing your Silent Tears

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The Lost.. 08 November 2009

wonderful and meaningful poem.hope you achieve your wises.

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Good story...really liked it... Read my poem she killled me and all alone.

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Ishita Mehta 10 July 2009

well u have this quality or i dont is it just ur style of writing that ur last line speaks everything........ur concluding lines are always beautiful n meaningful.....very nice poetry........

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Eyan Desir 04 July 2009

Very nice..... nice poem

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Lillian Thomas 04 July 2009

Your heart will mend, but your poetry is like a snapshot of that moment of loss. good poem,

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 July 2009

the conclusive part u see is so golden- I will allways remember you in my heart ur silent tears have this much value ur poetry is loving too

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Sushmita Moktan 30 June 2009

hey somewhere someone is waiting for you...wait for the right time to cone..i m sure rit person will come to ur life soon...be happy always....

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Jasmin Bell 30 June 2009

this is a great poem.read my poem the tracks of my tears.i would like your opinion

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