Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Silent Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

SILENTLY LETTING GO OF ALL MY TEARS
CRYING ABOUT ALL MY CHILD YEARS
TRYING TO FORGET FOREVER
BUT I CANT NOW, NOR NEVER
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LUZAAN de Bruyn
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Martin O'Neill 19 January 2009

The last line hits like a hammer and makes my fists clench. I would beat abusive parent s within an inch of their lives, honestly. Mine were wonderful and I cannot understand people who would harm children like this. Your work has a thread of pain and emotional turmoil to it. I hope it is not all autobiographical? Peace of mind to you.

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Tia Maria 06 January 2009

There is so much sadness & the seriousness of these lines make it hard to comment without feeling. This is excellently written, with a maturity, born too soon of one who has had to face such hardships in life. We have to keep writing it out & keep on keeping on. God Bless & keep you, luv T

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Lovemo Queen 24 December 2008

oh...wow, that was so deep, and so well written, wow...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 November 2008

The perpetrators of this insane act should be locked up for life! !

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Joseph Poewhit 18 November 2008

The bottle does much damage in young lives

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