Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Silent Tears Comments

Rating: 3.6

.I lay awake, alone with my fears
trying to stop my flow of tears.
Waiting for that familiar noice.
of footsteps and the whispering voice.
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jason mcgookin
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Sharon Herzog 19 February 2011

Wowed again, very expressive, sad but powerful writing.

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aRE YOU SURE YOU JUST STARTED WRITING? yOUR STUFF IS DEEP. iT IS SO RELATABLE AND I CAN'T HELP BUT FALL IN LOVE WITH IT. YOU ARE GREAT! ! ! !

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Rosalita Fernandez 28 June 2009

so sad because its true, brilliant poem, good choice of words,

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Sharon-Ann Dawson 11 June 2009

Very expressive, evoking emotion is not always easy. very well written.

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I'm awe-struck by the sadness. I have no words.

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