Sunday, July 6, 2008

Silent Ringtone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't be surprised
if I don't answer the phone.
I would much rather
just sit here alone.
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Julie Neises
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Flying Lemming 11 July 2008

It's good to vent, even if it is to yourself... lovely use of words and rhythm to show the venom, i could see your smirk at the end. Keep on keeping on 8)

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Stone Granite 07 July 2008

Well done, very well done! !

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Kee Thampi 07 July 2008

not mad to o wish you'd reflect the countless bigmacs you've downed. You have no respect for personal space. I just don't have the courage to pen the good feels

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