Sunday, March 21, 2021

Silent Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I listen to the rain alone
Its unbroken melody unlocks
Consciousness
Cloudy sky maintains
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Nosheen Irfan
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 December 2022

Ms. Irfan the second line to me matters most Bravo!

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Anjandev Roy 17 December 2022

Superb piece......thanks for sharing.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 November 2022

Its unbroken melody unlocks Consciousness Cloudy sky maintains A weird silence No thunder No lightning No melodrama....what a great way of expressing! This is a magnificent poem. Top score!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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