Silent Predator Comments

I prefer the night and shining armor poem better but I loved the line ' buried six feet under in a coffin and tears' I may have gotten that sentence wrong but yeah you get the point nice job

What a wow piece. My gosh I think in my opinion you are the best dark writer here. Wow I can't wait to read more. Chilling! ! ! 10 from me. I can't believe this is your first piece.

the Saint is right.... this is a nice 'dark' poem.you did a great job for your first one. that is wat the poor man meant he doesnt know how to talk sometimes that is why he has me to help him in times of need...lol. I really enjoyed seeing u write it. good job. Becca

Nice....................