Thursday, March 28, 2013

Silent Pain Comments

Rating: 4.5

though I am not
before your eyes
my heart is always
there.
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Vishal Sharma
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Unwritten Soul 30 March 2013

A short write and too short for sweet write, but it has bitter a bit, still nice to feel_Soul

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2013

Lovely write with such wise lines, I really enjoyed it!

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Stefan Alexandru Ciobanu 28 March 2013

end is weak. especially the last verse.

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