Silent Pain Comments

I pray you continue to get the strength to go on and reach the happiness you desire! Nice work! ! !

There is lot of hope in your poem although you describe a lot of pain. that is life. thank you. dev

The desperate search for happiness The longing to show my goodness The endless fight of a wounded soul Darkened heart as black as coal. praying for strength and divine healing is the best way. thank you for this poem which leads the reader to a divine healing. tony

A sorrowful whisper from a hurting spirit. Beautifully composed and thoughtful rhyming patterns.