Thursday, September 27, 2012

Silent Night Comments

Rating: 4.7

Staring at the moon and the stars above
All night long
Singing a beautiful song
All alone.
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Alon Calinao Dy
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Niken Kusuma Wardani 05 October 2012

Great expression of feeling, thanks for sharing

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Babalola Augustine Adeola 05 October 2012

Hmmm... Missing someone could mean alot... Love your simplicity.

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Tribhawan Kaul 05 October 2012

Lover's wishes beautifully penned. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing Alon.

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Asif Andalib 02 October 2012

Good write. I enjoyed your poem.

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Louis Rams 02 October 2012

it is a long night that much i see, but it was your last verse that touched me. good write!

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Peter Maxharya 01 October 2012

Its so sweet and the flow is great i definately love it!

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Louis Cecile 01 October 2012

The brilliance of this poem is all in the flow and theme. It blends so well and the longing to bring the sound of love to a silent night is a great concept. Superb

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Payal Parande 01 October 2012

how alluring and fascinating...each word so beautiful and full of emotion..and each emotion so pure and gentle....a phenomenal and fabulous piece..i love it thank you for sharing love payal

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Alon Calinao Dy

Alon Calinao Dy

Samar, Philippines
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